The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

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The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The line chart illustrates the travellers number by three means of transportation every day on average in UK over the period of 1970-2030.

Overall, it is obvious that since 1970, cars have been the most popular vehicle in UK compared to buses and trains then are predicted to remain the dominance until 2030. Besides, more people each year prefer using cars and trains and the trend is expected to be kept in the next 11 years.

Commencing at approximately 2 million passengers in 1970, the average quantity of people commuting by bus daily have fell gradually to just above 3 million passengers in 2019 and then will remain steady during the next 11-year timescale. The figure for bus was overtaken by this for train at about 3.5 million people in 2015.

Oppositely, there was a moderate improvement the everyday average number of passengers using trains by 1 million people in the first 30 years of the period before its steady remain in the next 10 years, then have been growing and will reach its peak of 5 million passengers in 2030. Similarly, the figure for car users grew at the same pace with train users from 5 million passengers to the all time high of 9 million passengers in 2030.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...high of 9 million passengers in 2030.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, similarly, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75238095238 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55788319513 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1363926878 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.571428571 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253017655712 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126418772544 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697977406768 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173410014673 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714855511981 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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