An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in a developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?
It is irrefutable that professionals are immigrating to the western world to fulfil their necessities. The numbers are rising every day such as doctors and teachers are vacating their own developing nations to do jobs in the developed regions. This essay will discuss the impact of the phenomenon and relevant solution will be outlined in the following paragraphs.
Lack of speciality staff in the region will be the outcome, after the mass movement of trained individuals. Unavailability of a worker in the hospitals or in the education sector will result in suffering for the remaining people of a nation. Furthermore, the mismanagement of infrastructures, as it will force the ground staff to manage, which is beyond their limits. Hence, it will create an imbalance in society. For instance, the job of doctor performed by a nurse will not result in the satisfactory for the patient and therefore, the receiver will suffer more.
Hike in salary is the key factor for any individual to deboard them from abroad journey. Providing basic necessity and surplus facilities will keep the person motivated to serve his own part of the world. In addition to this, posting them in their home town will keep them attracted towards their culture and traditions, thus psychologically the person remains boosted throughout his carrier and serve his country for the betterment of everyone.
In conclusion, motivations by means of a nation's love and amenities can encourage educated people to work in their own region, which in turn will save other people from infections. Moreover, the balance will be created in the society and optimum use of facilities can be enhanced, rather this trend in future will support the nation's growth and development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17314487633 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96156924319 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1012520848 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14468036047 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526585086149 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476547235506 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101006688388 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546693987648 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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