People should question the rule of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
If we look at the history of most of the countries, the changes and progress had taken place because of people questioning the rule of the authority. The transition from autocratic to democratic rules in a country can be regarded as a result of it. I am consonant with the statement , that passively accepted rules of authority should be questioned by the people. Since, the interrogation is generally a thought of peoples for the necessary changes on the authority rules, It doesn’t mean it has to be implemented by the authority.
Take, For example, The revolution movement started by mahatma gandhi in India for their independence from British rulers. If there was no man like mahatma gandhi to question the British authority, India would never have been independent country like today. The changes and revolution commenced in the country only after people begin to question the rules of the authority.
Similarly, Nepal was a country ruled by king for many centuries until a people’s movement for democracy advocate to eradicate the authority ran by king’s policy. Different political parties and citizens united together to overthrow the kings throne which brought a democratic changes in the country.
Recently in Nepal, There has been burgeoning in the tech start ups, one of which is ride sharing start ups where people with a bike and licence can register to the application and give ride to the customer nearby. The problem created by such technology is harassment and consequences in case of death of customer by accident. The government acted actively to fine those riders on the cause of illegal work. The pervasive news started to question the authority about the extend to which these services are providing employment and alleviating the need of riders to look for employment abroad. As a result of it, Government is to set an different rules regard this issue. If there was no questioning to authority about their archaic rules, it would have impacted to other growing tech startups too.
This is not to say that I think that this statement is the best course of action in every situation and for every person. There are certain situation in which questioning authority could lead to thwart of development and policy implementing process. For instance, if a candidate elected from a certain area begun to consider the questions on rules from different peoples wit different viewpoints then, It will obviously create conflict and hindrance in development activities. So, It is not always best to question the rules of authority.
In essence, I agree with this statement as long as it is not taken to the extreme. One cannot achieve social or political changes without questioning the authority, and certainly changes have been necessary in our history and will be necessary in future. However, certain situations do exists where an entire population adhere to this statement could find itself hindering progress and drawing somewhat arbitrary lines among people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, similarly, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2518.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 488.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15983606557 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84889168919 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493852459016 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 806.4 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1023191645 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.454545455 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235842435935 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731109207676 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774314834662 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123684206244 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799960664924 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.