Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, scientific research across the world is carried out and controlled, sometimes by governments, sometimes by private companies. While others argue that this should be supported by corporations, I agree with the view that scientific research should be funded and supervised by the state.
The private sector argue that they are willing to researching science but there are two significant dangers in this. In terms of the quality and objective of research its, companies which carry this out may be to tempted to manipulate the results to maximize profits. There are numerous scandals as a result of new products being introduced hurriedly after inadequate trials. For example, thalidomide, developed by a German drug company, which resulted in the birth of thousands of malformed children. From the ethical perspective, if the research of all fields such as genetic engineering is carried out by corporations which may lead to negative consequences for society. For example, genetically modified crops ,unproven effects, can be taken a toll on ecosystems due to meddling with nature.
Although governments have more important concerns, but it is essential that they should be responsible for scientific research. First, the highest standard can be set by providing funds for university departments to carry out the high-quality research, to bring more benefits for society, not to break into new markets to gain a competitive edge. Knowledge is accumulated can be shared worldwide throughout academic community. Second, government decision-making is the best way to prioritize expenditure on specific field research, taking into consideration the needs of society, both present and future. One example is the development of renewable energy to meet growing demands.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea governments should bear sole responsibility for scientific research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61672473868 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16235444244 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620209059233 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0414136681 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316438695463 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106516094453 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828683194904 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220076276557 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790219945702 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.