The Internet is a modern technology which makes people's life easier by simplify the processes of searching and entertainment. There are beliefs that the Internet is a great source of communication but some people say that it may not be the best resource to find data. This essay will discuss why the Internet is definitely the main platform for a searching and discuss why it is advantageous to communicate through it.
The World Wide Web can be an effective way to keep in touch with relatives, friends, colleagues. Nowadays speed of sending the messages is extremely high what allows to make a conversation without delay. Moreover, often messengers or social medias provide an internal security system, thus the dialogs are always protected by designers at least. As an example, WhatsApp one of the most popular application. It gives you an opportunity to get messages wherever you are 24 hours a day, while classic way with a mail takes different times depends on distance. Therefore, the Internet is a convenient domain to communicate.
Depends on purposes people can search information in various sources. If you need to download a game, a movie or an album, the Internet would your great mean. For example, articles which students need are usually extremely expensive in online scientific journals so far. In this case it would rational to visit a university library which is full of free content for local customers. In some situations the Internet is not a magic bullet.
In conclusion, the Internet plays huge role in our lives. It gives an access to a different services and allows rapidly and safety communicate with each other. However sometimes it is better to decline these offers. In my opinion, the World Wide Web is an incredible invention of 21st century with a wide range of opportunities. I, personally, use it for communication and searching the latest news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
... messages is extremely high what allows to make a conversation without delay. Moreover,...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the Internet is not a magic bullet. In conclusion, the Internet plays huge rol...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
... plays huge role in our lives. It gives an access to a different services and allows rapi...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...and safety communicate with each other. However sometimes it is better to decline these...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04153354633 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92012779553 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603833865815 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6650931462 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0526315789 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241954857922 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064630481388 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630539869821 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136333161816 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597691668194 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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