Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards of my interest in a course about "Artificial Intelligence and Robotics" offered by your prominent 'ABC College', which commence from 24th of April and last only for three weeks.
I am currently working as a "Project Module Lead" at Accenture, furthermore, I have around ten years of experience with prestigious multinational organizations like HCL, AON Hewitt, IBM to name a few. I have a strong understanding of computer languages as well as machine implementations, as I have done my graduation in "Mechanical Engineering" from IIT, Dehli. Moreover, I also have a few certifications in "Cloud Computing". I believe that by gaining this opportunity, I can achieve pinnacles of my field and enhance my professional skills.
The reason of choosing ABC College is the practical approach to provide a holistic understanding of facts, in addition to this, I have researched through online reviews and recommendations, which ascertained that the facilities and study tactics are unparallel to the rest of colleges in England.
Please provide me further details about course and accommodation, also about my eligibility to join this course as well. I will wait for your prompt reply.
Your Faithfully,
Amir Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regards of my interest in a course about 'Art...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ree weeks. I am currently working as a 'Project Module Lead' at Acce...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ike HCL, AON Hewitt, IBM to name a few. I have a strong understanding of computer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.525 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75003666649 2.54303337028 147% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.812697484 44.8134815571 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.777777778 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102779180673 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424924181115 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432369919832 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746931831064 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444292829479 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 70.7449484536 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 7.45979381443 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 8.71597938144 173% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 8.62886597938 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.