Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Advertiement plays a major role in everybody's life. advertisement is considered as an important tool for Marketing. With the help of advertisment, profitability and business of many entrepreneur's has increased dramatically. Nowadays, advertised products are sold more and are in high demand that those which are not.
My viewpoint is that advertisement induces one to buy product. Various Brand Ambassador's are portraying products in such a manner, which influences one to buy a product. The Price, quality and Quantity of the product is depicted with the help of advertisements well in advance.
however, some grocery shops offer packed foods. packed foods like meals, fruits and many more alike. busy and working people can easily buy them. The idea is introduced to the peple by means of advertising. some parents usually give this packed meals to their childrens as a lunch.
Due to the advertisement, one's time is saved in choosing the product. As advertisement has already demonstrated its features and quality. A human being has to just visit the store and buy the product and sometimes a person even don't have to visit the store . he gets the product at his doorstep by purchasing it online.
I totally disagree with the viewpoint that advertisement encourages one to buy things that they don't need. advertisement is a means of depicting a product,to buy or not is the ultimate choice of consumer. however, one cannot say that because of advertisement I buyed the product.
advertisement has made a vast difference today in one's life today.it helps and saves one's time, energy and money. Whatever, might be the product cost, people buy it with the help of advertisement. however, advertisements are portrayed in such a manner, wherein everything about a product is known well in advance to the consumers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1722972973 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12571818318 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6721220634 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5909090909 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4545454545 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 7.06120827912 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245202972882 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750598713922 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597072700628 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13440731149 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684814171226 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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