In many countries plastic bags are the main source of rubbish causing pollution in oceans and on land, therefore they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that due to an increase in the usage of plastic bags in some countries, it has become major cause of pollution on both land and in water. Some people think that it should be banned. I completely agree with it because it is killing marine life and wildlife, along with that it is problematic for humans.
One of the vital reason’s plastic should be excluded is that it has negative impact on creatures. As it floats in the ocean, therefore some species often mistake it for food, and consume it. This leads to choking and suffocation, which causes death. According to a study carried out in 2015, up to 40 percent of turtle died because of plastic ingestion. Next, it is an issue for animals. They can easily get entangled in this waste thus, getting killed. This was exemplified in one the national geographic video that numerous animals get caught in plastic waste, and due to entanglement, they are unable to move hence, getting killed by vehicles.
Another indirect problem is for humans. Plastic materials are thrown carelessly by humans, which litters on the road, and gets into drainage channel which clogs the drainage. Due to this, human beings are exposed to water-borne diseases.
However, some people think that its usage should not be prohibited because it is handy and can easily carry much weight which is convenient for grocery shopping.
In conclusion, although it might be pocket friendly and appropriate to handle weight, but its harmful effects and problems are irreversible, additionally, it has huge impact on humans as well as on species, hence, I strongly feel that it should be forbidden completely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96389891697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69077818571 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58844765343 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0338180838 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208831315096 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665089755858 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426172487954 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105501812285 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667270564569 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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