Some of people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Practicing the same activities and refraining to do something new are preferred by several people. Others, nevertheless, think that one of the splendid things in life is to alter our previous habit. In according to this issue, I will present my perspectives in the following paragraphs.
I do appreciate of some arguments which believed that as an endeavour to keep doing the similar routine and refraining new experiences, numerous masses reckon to stay at their comfort zone rather than change it to a new one. There are two reasons of this argument. First and foremost, those individuals feel afraid to face a bad experience which possibly happens if they do a new thing. Second but not less crucial, all of them are too enjoying of their current activity which is, in the end, making them to prefer staying at their position.
Nonetheless, I personally agree to the other people would rather do new experiences instead of practicing the same routines. In according to this, I do believe that these individuals also have their own reasons. They, firstly, have an enormous curiosity about new things. Secondly, these masses are too fascinated to go and feel new experiences and conditions. They, lastly, simply want to go out of their comfort zone because they are going to find countless precious things and they used to learn something from this activity.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that an endeavour to go out of comfort zone is the best decision for individuals because it is capable of rendering more benefits rather than its drawbacks. Thus, I would rather to favour of the statements of people who desire to go out of their comfort zone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91134751773 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78938298045 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4385312014 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186552395396 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061895495856 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516367651204 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114822400984 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528105810129 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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