Some think that people are responsible for a solution to pollution made by transportation and others think that government are responsible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The pollution has been tremendously raised due to large number of vehicles on the road. Some people consider that it is responsibility of citizens to curb the pollution caused from the growing traffic, however other think that it is the obligation of state to combat this problem. In my opinion, we could tackle this problem with the collaborative efforts from government and individuals.
On the one hand, people must come up with initiatives to mitigate the effects of pollution contributed by automobiles. The mainstay to this belief is that public could cut off using the vehicles which are emitting harmful pollutants such as carbon monoxide and carbon dioxide in the environment. In the other words, the level of pollution will reduce, if more people commute by hybrid electric vehicles instead of using old conventional vehicles. Further, if people prefer carpool, public transport and cycling in moving to and from places, this will have positive impacts on their health and environment alike. In addition, people could grow more trees and plants because they absorb pollutants which could contaminate the environment.
One the other hand, it is advocated that state must devise strategies to reduced the levels of pollution. Firstly, government bodies can formulate vehicle emission standard and ban the vehicle which are not meeting these standards. To illustrate, it has been found from a survey report conducted by environmentalist in UK that countries which have legislated and carried out the vehicle emission standard were able to reduce pollution to a great extent. Lastly, government can run frequent awareness campaigns among masses about conservation of environment by growing trees and plants.
To conclude, pollution related to transport has risen at an alarming rate. In my opinion, we could control the levels of pollution with the equal contributions from government and individuals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, so, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41471571906 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91434680496 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558528428094 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6304356344 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.642857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18676623313 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646271569067 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486443874313 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120642853913 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510134010435 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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