Dear Mr. Smirnov,
I am writing with regard to my new role as GIS-analyst and my expanded duties as well.
As you know, I have been working in our company since 2015 and all this period I worked as part of our GIS team and my main duty was maintaining GIS-data base and coordinating field works. However, today I am in charge of the whole crew and every project of the cartographic department.
Frankly speaking, I do not have enough managing skills, especially of the financial part of a project. Therefore, I would like to attend three months course for GIS project management. The course is conducted in Australian Institute of Remote Sensing and complete cost of it is 2000 AU. It is a compatible price and include full time training as well as it is one of the best courses among similar ones. On top of project cost management, the course will cover project risk management.
As it is a full time course, I would like to ask you for educational leave from 1st of May till 31st of July. I have made all of the arrangements; my deputy will be able to manage all open projects. I am going to be in touch with him and if any unforeseen circumstances appears, I will handle it.
Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation.
Best regards,
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...U. It is a compatible price and include full time training as well as it is one of the be...
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... project risk management. As it is a full time course, I would like to ask you for edu...
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Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...t of May till 31st of July. I have made all of the arrangements; my deputy will be able to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
frankly, however, if, may, therefore, well, you know, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57456140351 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7245386687 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0995781408 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2307692308 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125225244454 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419326913131 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560232894599 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849936617049 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694042513999 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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