You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
1. say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
2. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
3. suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing well. I have received your letter and I am glad to hear that you have completed your tertiary education. I can understand your situation and the tough choices you have to make as choosing further studies over the job or vice-versa can have implications for the rest of your life. Let me briefly explain.
To elucidate as you have recently finished your graduation thus going back in the same environment will not benefit you, in the long run, moreover, it will make your life monotonous. Additionally, I know that you don't come from a financially strong background hence pursuing your post-graduation would mean additional financial burden on your family. In my opinion, you should pursue a job and gain valuable work experience which would not only make your position financially strong but also enable you to qualify for admissions in reputed universities. As the trend suggests most of the students who have work experience are given priority by tertiary bodies while applying for the postgraduate program.
Lastly, since you are a computer graduate I would suggest to look out for a job in software design, development or testing as it will be more related to your subject of study.
I hope you take my advice seriously and would like to wish you success in your future endeavours.
Yours sincerely
Saad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. I have received...
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Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...notonous. Additionally, I know that you dont come from a financially strong backgrou...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our future endeavours. Yours sincerely Saad
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, hence, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98230088496 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80159436835 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628318584071 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0374335948 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.363636364 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235953063189 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908318193464 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505304316594 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147662705447 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226705385847 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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