Nowadays there is a growing trend of private car ownership. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of environmental problems associated with this ?
There has been a significant rise in the number of car owners due to affordable motor-vehicle rates. Such usage of private vehicles, however, have several environmental drawbacks such as pollution, congestion and deforestation.
One potential merit of using the private car is that users can conveniently travel to distant places. As a result, this saves a considerable amount of time because there is no need to pre-plan the journey ahead. Another significant advantage is that the citizens are less dependant on public transport. In other words, the car owners do not look into timetables and schedules for travelling, unlike the bus and train services.
However, there are enormous demerits of using personal vehicles on the environment. Firstly, vehicles emit harmful greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide and methane. These smokes are responsible for deteriorating our surroundings, thereby causing tremendous air pollution. For instance, the researchers of the Indian Institute of technology have published an exclusive article stating the use of private car ownership as an essential reason for climate change in the country. Secondly, the increased use of car causes congestion on the road, especially during peak hours. This is exemplified by traffic jams in the city which are mainly induced due to the vast usage of private carriers. Lastly, the usage of each motor leads to deforestation. For example, In India, many forest space and reserved lands are demolished to build roads and widen the highways.
In conclusion, although there are benefits of using personal transport such as easy to travel and less reliable on public transit mediums, the disadvantages far supersede the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48301886792 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02982915699 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.600303581 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151293447771 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425211447236 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301050100715 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831059005415 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033812071895 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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