Today, it is obvious that computers are widely used in various sectors. Some people believe that computer technology has made us productive, however, other claims that instead of making us productive, it has made us technology dependent and somehow dull. This essay will discuss how the computer has made our lives convenient and modern despite some drawbacks.
To commence with, there is merely a single sector that does not use computer technology these days. It has automated almost every things and it is because of the computer that people are now able to complete their jobs in a very small span of time. For instance, it would take a week to send a letter to another part of the country but we have email system now and can also get a response in a blink of an eye. Hence, it is evident that computers have been able to save our time significantly and have finally reached the peak of productivity.
However, there are another group of people who hold a different view on this. They claim that the computers have taken away most of our times because we have spent most of our time searching for information rather than doing own research which has made us dull and our knowledge has dropped significantly. To illustrate, in a survey conducted by Rapid Solution, 45% of people these days spend their valuable time watching videos which have no significance to their lives. Thus, it is apparent to me that the computer has affected our lives negatively.
In conclusion, despite some of its demerits computers still play a vital role to bring happiness in our lives in many ways. Thus, it cannot be denied that automation in factories and communication efficiency are all possible only through the computer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 20.9802955665 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78745644599 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56037585715 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0366570049 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167015889653 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577518865571 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332294658783 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101156239551 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234812860422 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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