You are working at a Company. Write a letter to your manager to recommend opening a cafeteria at work, In your Letter say,
- Why it is required?
- Give recommendations how and where to do it.
- Explain why it would be beneficial to all workers.
Dear Sir,
I am writing with regard to opening of cafeteria at our workplace. It is necessary to have a kitchen in office. Allow me here to explain why is it require?
Firstly, I am glad to inform you about the strength of staff in office. There are total 200 Nos. Of employee work in office out of which 120 Nos. Of employee are male and rest are female. The present situation is such that the employees take the lunch at their desk and they feel that it is difficult to manage it on desk.
Secondly, The Canteen should be situated at corner of office. You are aware about we have plenty of space next to IT/Server room near corner. It will be completely fitted for utilization as cafeteria.
It would be so grateful for us if we utilize the corner space in our office as cafeteria by renovating with wall paints and furniture. It will beneficial for all the employees and employees feel free to take lunch there and spent some good times with colleagues during recess. I am looking forward to hear from you.
Thank you,
Yours Faithfully,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ovating with wall paints and furniture. It will beneficial for all the employees a...
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Line 9, column 299, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ues during recess. I am looking forward to hear from you. Thank you, Yours Faithful...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u. Thank you, Yours Faithfully, XYZ
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57591623037 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44205903126 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623036649215 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.2666666667 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190897137322 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571588066207 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465996880052 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107002946959 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491955516944 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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