Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Today, the world of technology is developing fast and we can not avoid of their impacts on our life.
Although many people claim time consuming activities like online games may make it difficult to training the children in compare to the past, but I do not think so. I feel this way for 3 main reasons, which I will explore them in the following essay.
First, having better condition in each field of our life causes more intelligence in kids, So, they may need to few time for learning class materials. It is common that they fill their time with other activities like social networking Web sites. For example, while I finish my assignments and want to have some fun I always visit scientific web sites, which help me a lot in my courses.
In addition, using educational programs in the frame of games is very interesting for children, and encourage them for more trying in that special matter. For instance, I have a little girl, who like online games. I down loud some mathematical software that helped her so much in learning calculation.
Last, by being friend with our kids, we will attract their attentions and talk with them about advantages and dis advantages of too-long spending time on cell phone, and etc. They will understand our meaning and help us to achieve a perfect program for their training. To clarify, last year, when my brother used huge amount of his time for playing online games, he could not pass his exams. I discussed with him about his fault kindly, and he accepted my advice. He is on of prosper person in our family now.
In all, what drives some people claim that training younger it is easy today than it was in the past, may fall in to 3 main categories as mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...intelligence in kids, So, they may need to few time for learning class materials. ...
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...elligence in kids, So, they may need to few time for learning class materials. It is com...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to class'
Suggestion: to class
... they may need to few time for learning class materials. It is common that they fill ...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 167, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...f too-long spending time on cell phone, and etc. They will understand our meaning and he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64052287582 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46993109495 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7197963517 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240221343672 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670845161305 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527741141952 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104087363945 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371664776016 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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