Some people believe that it is better to grow up children in cities rather than in the countryside. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
bringing up children is a matter for many debates. it is thought by some that youngsters should be brought up in cities, however others have the notion that they should reside in villages. I firmly believe that children should be in cities rather than in rural areas in their childhood.
life in cities may ruin the future of children and this is why some people support village life. Since in urban areas everything is available such as drugs, drinks, fast food and so on, students have the tendency to use it and may become addict to these things, which may cause many health issues in future, for instance, cancer, mental problems and so on. Therefore, while living in cities the chance is more to have a miserable future.
many people including me support the city life, as it provides a good quality life style for children. The city schools guarantee high standard education, moreover, students could interact with people who live society life, to whom many have to be in contact for their bright future. To illustrate this situation, many pupil have been achieving good heights in their life as they get training from their young age itself about how to interact with others. many students are smart enough to communicate with each other, because they trained for that. Thus, living a city bring huge benefits to children in their future life.
In conclusion, even though city life offer many unwanted facilities, yet it could be solved if it is well handled by parents, it gives the high quality life for youngsters. I hope in future parents pay attention to the problems faced by children in city life to have a bright future ahead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81338028169 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35877388136 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55985915493 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8043318808 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151030859401 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709411640249 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588863470636 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105332783583 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514576706194 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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