working alone or teamwork
Everyone in the world spends a large amount of their time in the workplace. Different people with different personalities have completely different concepts to choose to work on a team or lonely. There are some people prefer to work independently and can self-manage themselves or can get done the job without a lot of hand-holding or support although the other group of people enjoy being a part of a big group and think need the other people's input, advice, help and support to get done their work. It is clear that each of these types has its advantages and disadvantages. As far as I know, participating in group work would have better results compared to other approaches. I feel this way for two reasons which will be explained in the following paragraphs.
The most important reason is that working with people in teamwork brings a lot of different ideas to that group which gives this opportunity to all the members to choose the best solution and capable them of group decision making but in jobs based on just one person there is no opportunity to share their ideas with anyone else. For instance, in so many big companies there are special rooms which let the employees come together to talk together about special ideas or even problems and try to solve them or find the best solution. In other word solving a problem with a group reduce a lot amount of pressure from just one person and can manage it. In other word working alone can put the people under abnormal mental pressure which this pressure can cause extremely harmful consequences such as depression or anxiety. In such circumstance, the result will not be desirable.
Secondly, while sharing the ideas is important, I feel there are additional reasons that most of the people choose teamwork. It gives people a chance to interact with other people at work. In these interacts people try to motivate each other which make the atmosphere enjoyable and more comfortable. Working in such a place is more interesting. When I started my first job years ago, I used to work in a crowded office. It was noisy most of the time but I could have seen that everyone helped each other with their problems. I was very happy to talk to the eclectic assortment of colleagues who came in each day. Although the salary was not good enough, it was a really good experience to be a part of teamwork and could provide me with a sense of happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 821, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...equences such as depression or anxiety. In such circumstance, the result will not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68557919622 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63425510264 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491725768322 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9389242853 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.315789474 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2631578947 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189869712543 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532842979306 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537424717825 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126441048542 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160256002556 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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