A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
- What suitcase and when dud he/she borrow it?
- Why do you need it back?
- What should he/she do about it?
Dear Jina,
I hope your recent journey in the UK was great. Actually, do you remember a suitcase which I lent you and decorated with a lot of stickers? it is a pressing need for me to get back as soon as possible because of my study abroad. As you know, I was confused about a couple of options between going to study abroad or entering a large enterprise that I offered.
Luckily, I have enrolled in a scholarship even if it seemed impossible, one of the principals who I have known since I was a primary school student, he wrote a reference for me. Eventually, I got fully covered scholarship for master degree in New York. I think you already came back from the United Kingdom last week, you may hand in until July 1st because at least, I need to pack my luggage before one week of the prolonged study. Time flies so faster than I expected and plenty of things I should prepare by myself.
Please keep in touch even I'm not in the country we are long lasting friends with each other. Also, let me know if you read this email.
Best wishes,
MJ
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- A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say-What suitcase and when dud he/she borrow it?-Why do you need it back?-What should he/she do about it? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jina, I hope your recent journey in the UK was...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...u and decorated with a lot of stickers? it is a pressing need for me to get back a...
^^
Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y myself. Please keep in touch even Im not in the country we are long lasting ...
^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if you read this email. Best wishes, MJ
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, may, so, at least, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34848484848 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42447915511 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70202020202 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3374843852 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2727272727 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171656813935 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516069820932 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055295865389 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101979914252 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437981304838 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.