; You are due to start a new job next week, but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your employer including
- your situation
- Your problems
- When you think you can start
Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter to explain my situation why I am not able to start the job next week. As you know, I was really looking forward to getting into the part of the enterprise as a senior data analyst. So, I have been amused since I heard that I got hired this positon. However, an impediment is happening just few months ago. I had no idea it took more time than I expected.
FYI, I am living in a rural side which is located far away from our workplace. Due to a commute problem I was stucked among moving to the city or getting a car. I purchased the vehicle last month, but I got an accident which took place in the middle of the highway. The medical doctor said, my physical disorder is not founded but I need to take a rest at least 2 weeks. I was wondering if you could postpone the beginning date of my work it will be great.
Please let me know whether it's feasible or not and it's honored to reply as soon as possible.
Best regards,
MJ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to explain my s...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ted far away from our workplace. Due to a commute problem I was stucked among moving to t...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y as soon as possible. Best regards, MJ
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, at least, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17989417989 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32384180932 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693121693122 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1736954098 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8333333333 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154967849988 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415246132675 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622052187657 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836996974215 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067344155699 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.