Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience

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Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational,otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

Group of people consider it as a truth that youngsters should spend their free time by doing some knowledgeable activities rather than indulging in useless activitie. Study is important but there should be fun and creativity, when it comes to time for leisure. Person should gain enjoyment during such activity, as it is necessary to refresh oneself at mental level. Life will be boring if there is only learning and no joy.

I think everybody needs a break from monotonous routine and so as children. If anyone keep on studying then there will be a time when person's brain will stop thinking. To avoid this, there should be some amount of time allotment in between to do what you enjoy the most.

In my childhood we had two hours of club activity as a part of our school time table and we had to choose an activity of our interest to do, during those hours. That way, I developed my interest in painting and cooking very well as well as there was lot of pleasure. Apart from this, regular school picnics during winter time, assembly programs, for instance, singing competition Rangoli competition or monologue,these are all unforgettable moments which are I think necessary for every child. Such activities help building up children's personality, character and social skills.

I would say, education with leisure is better than only education and no entertainment. Free time should be relaxing and refreshing, specially for children. It reduces burden as well as increases their strength to learn or retain knowledge and better understanding with fresh mind.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: well as
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Suggestion: to build; build
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, apart from, for instance, i think, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02681992337 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79619997693 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9596870056 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1783274418 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596026937846 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448306297194 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106250206664 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240718154749 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Theme 2: Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere. (Agree or disagree)



    It is believed that spending money on arts is not very useful and that it could be directed elsewhere. I completely disagree with this and feel that arts are worth very expensive that is spent on them.

  First and foremost, arts are considered a national interest. In some countries arts have a significant importance and government maintains such kind of organizations that preserve arts. To exemplity, France,USA,London,Australia and a few countries have a different museums all over the country which exhibit ancient valuablr arts. People who are interested,can visit the museum which price is not very expensive  . The cost of entrance is undertaken by the government. Thus, the government puts effort to preserve the arts.

   Secondly, arts are considered method of get pleasure and entertainment by several people in the country. For example, the museum "Ermitage" which located in Saint-Peterburg,Russia there are a lot of precious pictures and valuable materials. Every year,approximately five thousand tourists visit this museum for the sake of pleasuring. For look all of the pictures every one on half minutes, need to people  approximately ten month. Encouragement for arts from government improves livelihood of billion people who base their career on arts. It impact beneficial both to people who work on arts and who enjoy from arts.

   To sum up, the arts play a important role in the lifes of people, it is very important for the government to make sure that arts are financed property.

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