After the introduction of globalisation, it is undeniable fact that traditions of some countries are affected by others. Many experts opine that, it is a natural criteria, however, some opponents argue that, it is a threat to the cultural identity. This essay partially agrees with the statement and it will illustrate in the following paragraphs.
On one hand, it is a natural human tendency to observe other cultures and implement some positive features of that culture into their own tradition. This repositioning has helped several societies to abandon their rituals, which were once stunting their socio-economic growth and catered them to achieve prosperity through adopting new traditions. Moreover, globalization has provided a platform where several communities are gaining knowledge on diffrent subjects, which were once considered as a taboo topic in their culture. For example, in several communities women were not allowed to perform any job before the introduction of globalisation.
- Due to effects of globalisation, the cultures of some countries are influenced by others. Some people think this is a natural process. Others think this is a threat to cultural identity. What is your opinion about this? 73
- Due to effects of globalisation the cultures of some countries are influenced by others Some people think this is a natural process Others think this is a threat to cultural identity What is your opinion about this 67
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 33
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 56
- Men and women can never share the same responsibilities at home and in everyday life. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 151.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60927152318 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15636392354 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695364238411 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4053643499 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228951002309 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095696881676 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684501665132 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190547805809 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742282368782 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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