Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
It has been observed that most of the professionals are not doing enough physical activities either on business days or weekends, and as the result facing health challenges. There are a lot of reasons of this issue and I believe this problem can, only, be overcome by joint efforts of whole community.
Firstly, when it comes to the causes of reduced exercise during working hours, the main reason is that most of the working places do not have any sports facility, due to which employees are not getting a chance to do any physical excursion in working hours. Secondly, people are becoming busier day by day, and sometimes they have to take their work to home, that is why, occasionally, free time is also consumed doing office work. Finally, it is noticed that even when people are not busy in office task, they spend more time on social media rather than playing any sport or getting any exercise.
To resolve this issue, employers will have to provide the work places with fitness centers and sports facilities, and conduct regular sports competitions among employees, for instance annual cricket and football matches can suffice the need. Furthermore, employees should not be allowed to take their work to home, and also supervisors should not be allowed to contact subordinates, out of office hours. In this way free hours can be used for doing healthy activities rather than just sitting in front of laptops. Moreover, governments should provide the community centers with budgets to build gymnasiums, where people can go and have exercise.
Since, this problem is not as simple as it looks at first sight, everybody in society including employer, employee, and government will have to play his role to take up the issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...t of the working places do not have any sports facility, due to which employees are no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9793814433 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5462224763 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580756013746 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.5874421783 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.9 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366511847645 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126515713527 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679529328297 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181720680614 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868666155379 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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