Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With ever increasing economic uncertainty, anybody can get stuck into unfortunate circumstances, for instance limited budgets or reduced opportunities. Some people think that it is better to embrace such state and try to adapt to it, while others say that it is wise to try to get out of any unlucky circumstances. Although it is tempting to stay in your comfort zone and not to upgrade your financial condition, it is always much better option to try to bring a positive change in your life.
There can be two different approaches towards any unfortunate condition. First is to adapt to such state by reducing expense and giving up on facilities and luxuries one can provide for his or her family. However, in such case one will never be able to upgrade his financial situation for example, a person got stuck into a low-income job will never be able to find a better opportunity. This approach can be helpful to make peace with one’s present state, but it can never help to improve living standards.
Second approach is to find new employment or business opportunities to change the financial situation in a positive way. This approach may be difficult and time consuming but the struggle done by one will, definitely, pay off in the long run by upgrading one’s living standards, without giving up on facilities and luxuries for one’s family.
Finally, as far as my opinion is concerned, I personally believe it is always fruitful to put effort in your present to bring a positive change in future, other than just embracing the things as it is. I think this attitude can be corner stone of not only one’s personal growth but also the development of the community as whole.
To sum up, whining about failure is, certainly, an easier option but it never pays off. The only thing that helps, is to invest yourself in your present to build a better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ities to change the financial situation in a positive way. This approach may be difficult and tim...
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Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...your present to bring a positive change in future, other than just embracing the things a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.826625387 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80342224071 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547987616099 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8724688594 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.923076923 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13728510443 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493870748555 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537852541305 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746711263104 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498055097024 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.