Some people believe that robots are important for humans to develop future, while others think it is dangerous invention that will impact society negatively. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Advanced technology allows people to develop state-of-the-art robots that are capable to accomplish tasks which people themselves are unable to do. We can see these technologies in the majority of aspects in our life. However, there is an argument about the importance of robots in our future and some people disapprove them, while others have a positive attitude towards them. In my opinion, although robots may cause employment issues for people, they can be irreplaceable tools in some fields, like space exploration that is essential for our future.
Admittedly, robots have caused a major concern among working-class since their introduction to the industry. Here I am referring to the fact that, some people are likely to lose their jobs because flexible and modern robots that can do their jobs. For example, most high-tech companies in the western world tend to implement new systems of operation involves
machines rather than humans.
On the other hand, there are many people, including me, who think we need these robots to build our future. In other words, there are certain uses of robots that humanity will probably benefit from in the near future. A good example of this would be space explorations. Various types of rovers are being utilized in missions on Mars and the Moon and this will certainly continue. Further explorations can help us to understand our universe clearly. We can use the knowledge obtained from the researches in order to secure our on our planet. Furthermore, robots are often used conditions where people are not able to manage. This shows that, in the coming years, we can make use of them in different ways.
To conclude, I have to admit that people’s concerns about their jobs are reasonable. However, I strongly believe that using robots will eventually result in the bright future of humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lement new systems of operation involves machines rather than humans. On the o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12541254125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73252179871 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5295149637 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3529411765 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222490228533 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656935671281 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583423697367 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10240393343 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708335697448 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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