Prevention is better than cure ,researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in prevention measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays it is argued that investing in preventing measures would be better than financially supporting expensive researches and diseases treatments. This essay will explain the reasons behind this statement and give answers about my opinion on the topic.
First of all, prevention is a fundamental part of healthcare, that can be costly but in the long run, it always results in fewer expenses like illnesses treatments and hospital admissions. For example, when investing in vaccines' campaigns, those who get vaccinated will help those who are not vaccinated by stopping the transmission of different potentially deathly diseases. Nevertheless, non-vaccinated people can help other too: if they are taught the right preventing measures like the correct hand washing techniques, they will be aware of what to do and what not to do, helping in the reduction of spreading illnesses.
Although people might think that using preventing measures we do not need to conduct researches, those are in fact fundamental too. Diseases need to be studied in order to understand what can be done to fight them. prevention, however, is not necessarily cheaper than research: it is necessary to invest in the right number of different campaigns and in teaching courses for healthcare providers to instruct the population on important preventing measures. When we talk about diseases like HIV, it is not only important to know how to treat the infection, but it is fundamental that people know how to not contaminate others.
In conclusion, I totally agree with those who say that is it important to invest in prevention measures because they cut the costs of the treatments. But I also believe that support and financial aid should also be put into the research because it is important too that we know everything about preventable diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Prevention
...erstand what can be done to fight them. prevention, however, is not necessarily cheaper th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22448979592 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99305039838 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4314289051 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.636363636 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319146546252 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118247026505 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882344865389 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187846302881 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305159820131 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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