I disagree that all university students should be asked to take history class.
Firstly, History courses would put more academic pressure on students. College students have to study many courses and their schedule is very tight. For example, a economics student not only have to finish his professional papers for his credit, but also he needs to find the part-time job to get social experience. His pressure is so heavy that he could not afford to take any courses, such as history. School should not require students to learn this course, because students would worry whether they could finish their homework on time and what should they do to pass final exam.
Secondly, history course will lead more financial pressure to parents. As we all know, university tuition is usually too expensive to afford and it is different from the middle school tuition which has government subsidies. For instance, in order to encourage everyone to study, the middle school students’ parents only need to spend 30% of the tuition and the government will pay the rest tuition. However, university tuition should parents pay all with themselves, the government will not help parents to pay for some tuition. Only college tuition is unaffordable for many parents. If school requires students to have a new history course, it will make a lot of students cannot continue to study in university.
Admittedly, taking history class could let students to learn new knowledge and widen their vision. For example, students learn the history of the world war, they can know the harm of war and the advantage of peace. It will lead students to cherish the peaceful life. Nevertheless, new knowledge could be acquired by other ways, such as history TV programs and history books, even from parents. Those ways also can help students to learn about history.
In conclusion, I think it is unnecessary for all major students to take history course.
I disagree that all university students should be asked to take history class.
Firstly, History courses would put more academic pressure on students. College students have to study many courses and their schedule is very tight. For example, a economics student not only have to finish his professional papers for his credit, but also he needs to find the part-time job to get social experience. His pressure is so heavy that he could not afford to take any courses, such as history. School should not require students to learn this course, because students would worry whether they could finish their homework on time and what should they do to pass final exam.
Secondly, history course will lead more financial pressure to parents. As we all know, university tuition is usually too expensive to afford and it is different from the middle school tuition which has government subsidies. For instance, in order to encourage everyone to study, the middle school students’ parents only need to spend 30% of the tuition and the government will pay the rest tuition. However, university tuition should parents pay all with themselves, the government will not help parents to pay for some tuition. Only college tuition is unaffordable for many parents. If school requires students to have a new history course, it will make a lot of students cannot continue to study in university.
Admittedly, taking history class could let students to learn new knowledge and widen their vision. For example, students learn the history of the world war, they can know the harm of war and the advantage of peace. It will lead students to cherish the peaceful life. Nevertheless, new knowledge could be acquired by other ways, such as history TV programs and history books, even from parents. Those ways also can help students to learn about history.
In conclusion, I think it is unnecessary for all major students to take history course.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ir schedule is very tight. For example, a economics student not only have to fini...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
...ion. However, university tuition should parents pay all with themselves, the government...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06896551724 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58515605135 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514106583072 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4018249732 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.505364162941 0.236089414692 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176458018267 0.076458572812 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144864586439 0.0737576698707 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311177693696 0.150856017488 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123993081891 0.0645574589148 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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