At some universities, students take part in making decisions about the issues that affect daily life of everyone on campus, such as how many hours that the libraries should be open each day or what kinds of food should be served in the cafeteria. But at some universities, experts are hired to make these decisions, students almost never involved. Which approach do you prefer and why.
Why do students spend their time on deciding the issues about their daily life? I prefer that experts should be hired to make decisions and students almost never involved.
First, students are always shortage of the ability to control themselves. That is because students do not have the ability to control themselves, so they come to the university to study. Students went to university, so they need experts who are more experienced and wiser to help them to be better. For example, when I studied at college, most of my classmates including myself always want to escape from the class and go to play computer game or shopping which can make us happy, so it is difficult for us to make decisions about our campus issues.
Second, students have less energy to make decision about the campus issues than experts. As we all know, the competition in the society is so fierce that students should not only learn new knowledge but also take part in many activities during their college life. For example, students can make themselves more competitive in the future by taking part time job, so they have no time and energy to make decisions on campus issues. However, experts’ job is to help students make decisions on campus issues.
Though, students know themselves better than experts and experts make decisions for all students, so maybe those decisions are not appropriate for everyone. However, students can adjust the expert’s decisions according to their own situation. For example, the expert make a rule to turn off the light and go to bed at 10 PM, but I have an English test tomorrow, so I stay up late to review my English materials.
In conclusion, I think that experts can make more reasonable decisions to students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ore competitive in the future by taking part time job, so they have no time and energy to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91554054054 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6500595215 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530405405405 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1300858787 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233931231873 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948792906862 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523461701432 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143558743383 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733830030863 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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