In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impacts of ageing populations.
In the contemporary world, the life expectancy of many countries is rising significantly. There are several impacts of this increasing rate on people and society, and some effective solutions should be proposed to tackle this problem.
To begin with, the increasing life expectancy is likely to lead to some effects on individuals and society. Firstly, as most people need to take care of their elderly parents, they might have not enough time for their nuclear family. For example, couples who have many children are likely to need to work hard to cover their accommodation expense, and they might lose their job when they need to look after their parents. Secondly, people living longer would cause a burden on society. To be specific, since elder people are likely to have illness frequently, healthcare service might not be able to serve all residents.
Several actions need to be taken to address aging populations. The first solution would be for individuals to work longer and retire later. By doing this, people can save much more money to prepare for their retirement life. Additionally, the authorities should impose more appropriate labor legislation to extend the working time of workers. For instance, the retirement ages of some European countries are under 60, so many social and economic experts proposed to raise the retirement ages by 2 to 5 years in 2020.
In conclusion, some impacts might be caused by the high life expectancy, and the government and individuals should come up early with solutions to this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13492063492 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73431991855 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563492063492 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7704954419 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251659136393 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983987315456 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683154881313 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180600077137 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588583826105 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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