Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
It is highly recommended that the authorities take care of scientific experiments instead of private businesses. While there are some arguments in favor of scientific research by corporations, I completely agree with this former statement that this should be funded and supervised by the state.
On the one hand, having the main danger of private control of research that affects directly the aim of this research. The results of the investigation may be flawed due to the profit motive. This is because companies can put their hands into the research to change the result that can help them contribute to their finance. For example, there are a lot of pharmaceutical businesses exchanges the ingredients of medicines to some of them cheaper, which might take a negatively great influence to the patients because of financial gain.
Although the government has to allocate resources to many finds of spending public, it is essential for them to be responsible for scientific research. Firstly, the universities can be supported the finance by the authorities to work out which research can be beneficial for society, not to break into new markets, or to gain a competitive edge. Secondly, government decision-making is the best way to prioritize expenditure on specific areas of research, taking into consideration the needs of society, both present, and future. One example is the authorities put a huge investment in the searching for medicines to tackle dangerous diseases such as cancers.
In conclusion, I think the investigation should be conducted by authorities rather than private companies because of those above reasons
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3166023166 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14811774545 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2127066604 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.181818182 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246957440525 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886189206298 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638062921371 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153689772906 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03922183829 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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