Nowadays, technology is growing by leaps and bounds and job market is one of them. Companies are stressing their job qualities in practical skills rather than book knowledge.There is always never ending debate on giving priority to implementation skills or to a theoretical knowledge. Some demographics state that industries should rely more on theoretical and some other on practical. Let's discuss both the views and comes to a conclusion.
These days, fair amount of people voicing their opinions on real time experience and industries are among the first. They believe that if a person has experience, then it is easy for them to put directly into the job rather grooming them on trainings, making them to understand real-life scenario. Even it decreases investment cost on trainings for the company. As soon as skilled person hired in to that particular position they directly lands in trouble shooting the issue in no time. This increases company's pride in turn gives favorable persona in the market to endorse their products. People even state that, in future there will not be any formal qualification to get a job if he has practical knowledge.
On the other hand, it is undeniable fact that book knowledge should be given higher priority in comparison with the practicalities in current generation. Certain people argue that an individual requires theory instead directly jumping on practical skills. Universities are among the one who gives least priorities.
According to me, Companies are prone towards practical knowledge where as universities keen on theory, the ultimate destination for individual is to get a good job. The colleges should educate their children to concentrate more on practical approach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...tical skills rather than book knowledge.There is always never ending debate on giving...
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Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'theoretical knowledge'.
Suggestion: theoretical knowledge
...priority to implementation skills or to a theoretical knowledge. Some demographics state that industrie...
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Line 1, column 387, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...heoretical and some other on practical. Lets discuss both the views and comes to a c...
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Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'gives the least'.
Suggestion: gives the least
...lls. Universities are among the one who gives least priorities. According to me, Compan...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...the one who gives least priorities. According to me, Companies are prone towards practical ...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...s are prone towards practical knowledge where as universities keen on theory, the ultima...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31386861314 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97435179624 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0455056371 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182498747752 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535190715191 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591812910254 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107916851441 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062701317375 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.