In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In a number of countries, children work for money. Some people say that this is not proper, whereas, others believe that it is a priceless experience that teaches responsibility. In this essay, I will examine both views and then give my opinion.
On one hand, it is often thought that working as a child is exploitation because children, more often than not, do not have the courage to stand up for what they believe in especially when they are dealing with adults. So they may end up being underpaid and overworked. Furthermore, at this time of their lives, they ought to be in school, learning and picking up skills so that they can become productive members of the society.
On the other hand, children who work have an idea of the real world. For instance, they learn that value of money. They also develop business skills such as the ability to negotiate, persuade, and market goods and services. Also, working enables them to easily make informed decisions about their careers in the future.
To conclude, although I believe that children working is oftentimes the characteristics of a third world country, I know that there are some societies that permit it because they want their children to learn basic skills about business and responsibility. Based on my experience living in Nigeria, I see that child workers are always exploited and my opinion is that it should be banned and criminalized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, may, so, then, third, whereas, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92050209205 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73091974533 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6888181758 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212393906658 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862123703741 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714640105047 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149890096719 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966702078678 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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