Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who casn go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- Explain why you cannot go anymore
- Say who can go instead of you
- Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Tim,
How're you? How's family too? I believe you're doing just fine. Anyways, I'm writing to let you know I won't be able to join you to go to the cinema anymore.
It's so unfortunate that after all the plans we made for the outing, professor Collins has fixed an impromptu test on psychology 111 on the same date as the movie. Despite our plea, he insisted attendance was compulsory. Now, I'm really pissed
But not to worry, I have a friend who could go with you. Although I know you don't really like strangers, James, my neighbour, is really a funny person. He's an extrovert who enjoys the company of others. Believe me, he'll fit the part.
Anyways, I hope you'll consider him. If you do, please call him on 0803 320 4515 to meet up and talk about the plan. Do enjoy your outing!
See you soon.
Your friend,
Bale
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: How's
Dear Tim, Howre you? Hows family too? I believe youre doing just ...
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Suggestion: you're
... Howre you? Hows family too? I believe youre doing just fine. Anyways, Im writing to...
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Suggestion: I'm
...believe youre doing just fine. Anyways, Im writing to let you know I wont be able ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...nsisted attendance was compulsory. Now, Im really pissed But not to worry, I ...
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Line 8, column 78, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... could go with you. Although I know you dont really like strangers, James, my neighb...
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Line 8, column 153, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: He's
...my neighbour, is really a funny person. Hes an extrovert who enjoys the company of ...
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Line 8, column 216, Rule ID: HELL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'he'll'?
Suggestion: he'll
...joys the company of others. Believe me, hell fit the part. Anyways, I hope youl...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...hell fit the part. Anyways, I hope youll consider him. If you do, please call hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, really, so, after all, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48366013072 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23364997057 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.78431372549 0.622605031667 126% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0157608133 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.0 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.9285714286 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365940682038 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109841743303 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991160999016 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169635512626 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900411438531 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.52 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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