Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems
These days some of the society believed that increasing the price of petrol is the best solution to overcome the growing traffic and population problems. There are both advantages and disadvantages of increasing the fuel expense and how its impact in some aspects. In this essay I absolutely disagree with the decision after considering that it gives more drawbacks rather than benefits for several cases.
In the other hand, the main benefit of escalating the petrol funds, it is indirectly saving the states budget which can be allocated to another sector. It is because the expense that usually subsided in petrol is replaced bu fuel consumer. So the expense allocated in another sector which the expenditure more necessary to be covered such as infrastructure, agriculture, and education. As the result, the expense will be more beneficial plotted in other sectors rather than totally paid in petrol. So it is too important to increase the petrol funds but considering in microeconomic view is necessary.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks of increasing the petrol funds and its unexpected impacts. Firstly, it will give a deep impact on the lives of people and the poor will often feel the impact the most, such as the fuel price increase, more expensive the daily needs expenditure. Then it will turns out to unstable especially un economic sectors, such as inflation that will trigger the society to rally on the government due to unprosperous. Therefore, the impact is directly affect the society stability and it js going to be worse. So there is no doubt to keep the statement that increasing petrol price js not about the best solution because it is causing instability in so many sectors.
In conclusion, from right here I stand that I don’t believed if escalating the petrol’s price is the best solution to tackle the worse traffic and pollution problems. In my opinion, it gives more bad impacts directly rather than the benefits to out country and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05438066465 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82302319076 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501510574018 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9369250788 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22223897338 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774592102303 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926756244088 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143920276776 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449738030176 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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