Your neighbor burns his garbage near your house.
1) complain about the situation.
2) explain about the affects of his actions on your family.
3) suggest a solution.
Dear Smith,
I am living in your neighborhood house no.311A, Paul street. We have obeserved that you often burn your rubbish in the plot attached to our house. I am writing to complain about this situation.
This is cause of nuisance for me and my family. The smoke produces from the burning of garbage drift directly into air condition units and windows of my house. As this disgusting smoke fills our room, it becomes difficult for us to breath. Especially, the fumes of smoke are hazardous for children. Moreover, when the wind blows the ashes of smoke spread around the lawn, garage and pool, and causes them to look untidy. I am sure you will understand that this is a worrying situation for all of us.
I’d like to suggest that you should place our waste in the bins and ensure the garbage collectors would take it on daily basis. This would be a big relieve for us and the neighborhood as well.
Hopefully, you would consider my suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Sara Batool
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| 2019-06-26 | Sara Batool | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77456647399 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5180029392 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653179190751 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1754239907 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5384615385 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3076923077 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157929999855 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584008382695 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670802980956 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822756245474 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100115995622 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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