some believe that morden technology has made people less socially active, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
today technology has involve in every aspect of our life, it is irrefutable to say that technology has mad people life bed of roses. different people have different opinion about this topic, some believe that because of technology people became less socially active while others have conflict thought. In this essay we shall discuss both the views before forming any opinion.
To begin with, today technology has rooted its feet completely in human life, human life revolve around the new inventions and gadgets like phone, computer and laptop. it made our life so reliable that we can do our work simply from the home. it not only help us in office work but also in household work invention of robot is not less than gift for human, as robots help to complete the work before time. now life with technology is indeed impossible.
On other hand, the tradition of meeting and gathering has lost some where, because human became so lazy that they do not even want to visit kith and kin, the mode of conversation se now either phone call, email or messages which leads to loss of connections between love ones. As human is getting every thing on place in blink of eyes due to technology it is causing many health issues. For instance, day by day people are becoming obese as they are not physically active.
To sum up, technology is one of the most indispensable part of human life and and in today's fast paced world human could not survive without technology. However, family gathering and meetings are also important in order to not loss the love ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... loss of connections between love ones. As human is getting every thing on place i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71691176471 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37145462474 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8203328495 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.916666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203277239427 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693368371679 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761575005561 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117528243185 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119668000873 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.