You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
• provide information about yourself
• give details of your previous work experience
• say why the company should consider you for the job
Dear Sir/Madam,
With regard to the advertisement in “The Hindu” daily newspaper, dated 4th July 2019 for the requirement of senior sales executive in your car showroom. I wish to apply for the same.
As mentioned in my resume, which is sent along with this letter, I am Dheepa, holding MBA in sales and marketing from Anna University. I have overall 6.5 years experience in this field of sales and currently working as sales executive in Toyota car showroom, for the past 3 years. My 1st employer was Tata motors, where I started my career as executive trainee for 1 year and promoted as sales executive.
Since my passion is in the marketing field, I was the University topper and obtained a gold medal and in my MBA and hence I have pursued my career in the same line. If the job is offered to me, I would work whole heartedly for the development of the company along with job satisfaction and enhance my career as well.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Dheepa S
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-07-06 | dheepas | 78 | view |
| 2019-04-19 | Nadia Handa | 81 | view |
| 2018-11-22 | varunahuja29 | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, With regard to the advertisement in &apo...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, well, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73033707865 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71619772561 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5142891857 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5555555556 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164330379031 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740451594648 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399527977223 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910583951356 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191632046444 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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