A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Nature has created several living beings, including single cell to multi cellular organisms and they share their habitat with each other. There is a common opinion that, with the increase in human population, people started misusing other animals for their survival. However, many contradict to this point by placing an argument that, animals are required to be tamed and used for the benefit of mankind. In my opinion, it is required to prevent the exploitation of other living beings and due respect has to be given to them as well.
There are several reasons for emphasizing the prevention of animal exploitation. Firstly, the Earth is common for all and every single life has equal right to live in this World. Secondly, in order to maintain the life cycle, it is required to preserve all types of living beings, especially in their natural habitat. For example, when the population of predators like lion and tiger is reduced, due to hunting for their skin or other advantages, the count of its prey like deer, zebra, giraffe etc increases. This in turn affects humans, by spreading some types of contagious diseases from the infected preys, that could have been hunted, if these predators were alive. Finally, having developed the 6th sense, people should act with humanity and share their love to all living beings.
There are also several arguments that it is not wrong to use animals for the benefits and luxury of common man. For instance dogs are trained for guarding the house, cattle are reared for milk and meat, bulls are used in agriculture and pulling carts, elephants are used in entertainment shows and so on. Moreover, people suggest that, only the fittest can survive as per Darwin’s theory of “Survival of the fittest” and hence it is not bad to tame or hurt other animals. Furthermore, they feel animal produce like milk and meat is good for health and they can be used for enhancing our health.
To sum up, even though the human race is superior to others and has the capacity to dominate everyone, it is definitely required to show mercy and kindness to all the creatures existing in this World.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9173553719 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54838656223 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1097327437 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282178514731 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093227599922 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536999419576 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152651539906 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705440373047 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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