You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.
Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighborhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house
Dear Mona,
I hope that you are doing great, I'm writing to tell you that we recently bay a new house it is considered a small villa, it contain a 4 large bedrooms, one of them master, 3 bathrooms, 2 kitchens, 2 live rooms and a fascinating swim pool. As well as it is near from my lovely shop center which is Alolaia Mall, almost this is a brief about the nice news that I want to share it with you.
Even though, one of my neighbor is vulgar but we'll try to avoid him as much as we can, the rest are superb and helpful, such as, one of them come to our home and brought such a tasty food, furthermore told us if you need any help I'm here all the time.
So that, I'd you come to visit me to my new home with your family member on next Monday 20th of June, don't forget to bring with you a swimsuit with a towel.
Waiting to see you as soon as possible.
Your best friend,
Doaa.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-24 | btsjimin | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-14 | Ankita7443 | 73 | view |
| 2019-10-20 | banuashik | 81 | view |
| 2019-08-18 | DOAA KASSEM | 78 | view |
| 2019-08-03 | Xuyen | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mona, I hope that you are doing great, Im writ...
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Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...a, I hope that you are doing great, Im writing to tell you that we recently ba...
^^
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contains'?
Suggestion: contains
...ouse it is considered a small villa, it contain a 4 large bedrooms, one of them master,...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...urthermore told us if you need any help Im here all the time. So that, Id you ...
^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...help Im here all the time. So that, Id you come to visit me to my new home wi...
^^
Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., Id you come to visit me to my new home with your family member on next Monday 2...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ily member on next Monday 20th of June, dont forget to bring with you a swimsuit wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.97765363128 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0615963372 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670391061453 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2836579282 44.8134815571 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 16.8248392259 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232794621465 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130756012747 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889760720233 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103930112149 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430850794367 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.88 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.4 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.