Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community. Do you agree or disagree?
A significant number of people think that every offender should not be kept inside a jail, however, some should be provided with the opportunity to perform duties in society without earnings. This essay will discuss why some offenders deserve a chance of working in society without pay.
Daily workout with other society people and effective communication with them can help the criminals to improve their social life towards good path therefore, the state should provide such opportunity to offenders to improve their behavior. For illustration, Routine of daily work in the community provides the platform to offenders to know more about social needs and their importance in the society, therefore, these steps give hopes to the criminals that they can also have a good social life. For example, as per the Indian law, good behavior of prisoners in social work decreases their jail term.
Community work can improve the skills of a prisoner and provide the platform to learn more talent which later they can use in jobs after the jail term, therefore the chance of improvement is the vital step. Learning in the community work will enhance the skills of the worker and improve the chance of securing jobs. For example, gardening jobs in the society streets during prison period can help the same to get a job in the municipality department.
In conclusion, some offenders have committed crime unintentionally therefore, they should be allowed to work in the community to learn some essential skills for the future jobs and some can improve their behavior to have a good life after the prison term. Hence, I agree and believe that the state should apply such conditions on the offenders to improve their attitude towards society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08391608392 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59335925972 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479020979021 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4846322263 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.4 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22674745883 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985472205406 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810788972628 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159434608774 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088997624154 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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