Nowadays the crime rate is increasing, especially among teenagers. What are the reasons behind it? How can we reverse this trend? What punishment methods should be used, in your opinion?
In recent decades the number of committed crimes is constantly increasing and especially juvenile crimes. This essay will discuss the main causes, solutions and methods that can be taken to address this problem.
One reason for the growing crime rate is ignorance. The cost of education is increasing every year and becoming unaffordable to many people. Therefore, after finishing high school many youngsters end up on the streets and without proper education, they cannot find jobs. And the only option they see is to earn "easy money" by committing a crime, such as stealing, fraud and even murder. Furthermore, a lack of parental supervision can lead youngsters to be engaged in delinquent activities. For instance, if parents have a busy schedule at work they can fail to see that the child got under the bad influence of peers.
A good solution to address the problem would be making education more affordable. The government should subsidize Universities and make sure that children from poorer families have the ability to get a higher education. For example, low-income students can receive a grant from the government to attend the University. Another way to tackle this problem is for parents to participate more in the lives of their children by organizing weekly family dinners or outdoor activities.
After juvenile has been found delinquent there are a few methods could be used as a punishment, such as home confinement or counselling. In my opinion, these measures should be taken before placing a teenager in jail.
In conclusion, the lack of proper education or parental guidance can cause a height rate of juvenile crime. However, by making education affordable and simply paying attention to children can help to address this problem. Furthermore, before the sentencing to jail, the government should arrange to counsel or home arrest for teenagers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25165562914 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88891297305 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58940397351 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0738701029 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.2941176471 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170508643254 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550305024555 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410843939316 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102043868419 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377251490827 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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