in some countries, young people are encourage to work or travel foe a year between finishing high school and starting universities studies. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who decide to do this.
Nowadays, it is believed that in some countries, young people are encourage to work or travel for a year between finishing hing school and starving universities studies. In this essay, I completely agree that it gives more disadvantage rather than adventage, as we will discuss now.
In the one hand, it might be said that advantage to young people. Mostly young people not know actually perpose is aim and important to young people so taht they are choose traver for happy. need more space to determine good university will the future sustainable ability them. For example they feel confuse to choose university until whom work because limit time to apply for study, or many university in indonesia. so they want to inside best university in indonesia so they want to inside best university. Beside thsy can not to reach minimal score that university. As result they did not go to college.
On the other hand, young people exactly they are the young generation for country. so unfortunetely, if they wasting their time to work and travel. because if theyjoin to the university, they also be going to work and travel to. For example, they pupil and part time job in industry or company. While semester of their can vacation to many place that needed. Furthermore become pupil is veri interesting and different than student. Moreover there are many other activity outside study, it called extracurriculler. As result, important to continue study after finishing high school without wait one year again.
Overall, it is no doubt that no deferring from going to college. this is especially for young generation countries to create kind civilization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...ortant to young people so taht they are choose traver for happy. need more space to de...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Need
... taht they are choose traver for happy. need more space to determine good university...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun university seems to be countable; consider using: 'many universities'.
Suggestion: many universities
...cause limit time to apply for study, or many university in indonesia. so they want to inside be...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...study, or many university in indonesia. so they want to inside best university in ...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to reach minimal score that university. As result they did not go to college. O...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...y are the young generation for country. so unfortunetely, if they wasting their ti...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
... wasting their time to work and travel. because if theyjoin to the university, they als...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... travel to. For example, they pupil and part time job in industry or company. While semes...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d part time job in industry or company. While semester of their can vacation to many ...
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Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun place seems to be countable; consider using: 'many places'.
Suggestion: many places
...While semester of their can vacation to many place that needed. Furthermore become pupil i...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...can vacation to many place that needed. Furthermore become pupil is veri interesting and di...
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Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...pupil is veri interesting and different than student. Moreover there are many other ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...interesting and different than student. Moreover there are many other activity outside s...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...hat no deferring from going to college. this is especially for young generation coun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06593406593 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72276263756 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.487906871 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7894736842 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3684210526 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347793771551 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930429634947 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127348375328 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225878300952 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138505088226 0.056905535591 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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