The reading states that the wood companies in the United States don't have to recieve eco-certification which is given by an international organization. However, the professor opposes this arguement and refutes each of the points made in the reading.
First, the reading claims that American consumers wouldn’t be so interested in the eco-certification label because they do not consider that these advertises represents the truth. On the other hand, the professor implies that all the Americans don’t treat the same way to these advertises. They could react to these eco-certificated products very favorably for international reputation of their country.
Second, the reading argues that the eco-certificated wood would cause a great increase in price because there would be fees must be payed to certification agensies so that, the consumers will be more likely to buy the uncertificated woods. Opposely, the professor disaggrees with this idea by explaining that the price difference would be small (maybe less that %5), and US costumers would choose these products to benefit their country and preserve the environment as well.
Lastly, the paragraph states that this eco-certificated products can only be beneficial if they would be sold to abroad. Controversly, professor refutes this idea and he says that if US wouldn’t sell its own products in it, then there would be a competition in foreign countries and that would be unbeneficial for US.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The reading states that the wood companies in the united states ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the wood companies in the united states dont have to recieve eco-certification which...
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Line 2, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...professor implies that all the Americans don't treat the same way to these a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...od would cause a great increase in price because there would be fees must be paye...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, may, second, so, then, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 228.0 270.72406181 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43859649123 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30926211695 2.5805825403 128% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2813589697 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.777777778 110.228320801 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0684507009785 0.272083759551 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351623124046 0.0996497079465 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538079078109 0.0662205650399 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0539740709215 0.162205337803 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497498917332 0.0443174109184 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.3589403974 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.8541721854 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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