A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.
Dear Mohan,
I am glad that finally, you made your plan for a vacation. I went to Goa last year for a week in December and it is wonderful places especially for sea lovers and you are one of them, therefore I would suggest you take a trip to Goa.
I and my wife stayed in old Goa at my cousin home. Although it is far from sea beaches, the beauty of churches and other ancient buildings is amazing and wonderful to see. Staying at my cousin place saved a lot of money for us because the hotel stay is costly in Goa, even in outskirts.
You must visit Cambodia beach, it is beautiful to watch and many foreigners visit that beach every evening. Staying on the beach the whole night is a wonderful experience. Please do not forget to take beer with you while visiting the beach because the drink is not available there. Furthermore, try seafood also, their speciality is pamphlet fish, it is a local fish fried and salt added and It tastes delicious.
I am sure you will have a great vacation in Goa. If you have any query call me any time for clarification.
Best wishes,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ould suggest you take a trip to Goa. I and my wife stayed in old Goa at my cou...
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Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rification. Best wishes, Vishal Bhat
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44827586207 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43278943049 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635467980296 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.301398954 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242522318342 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838106843359 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812491175321 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155054251042 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945689388316 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.