At present, the media affects people’s lives significantly.
What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive
development?
Media has a significant impact on the lives of people these days. The main impact on society is that people are buying unnecessary things by being influenced by the media and it is a negative development because people are facing financial problems due to excess spending.
The main impact of the media on people’s lives is that the media easily influence people, and they end up buying expensive products that are not necessary. In other words, people watch advertisements for popular brands on TV and in print media and famous celebrities promote them. Therefore, they want to buy those products because they think that it will raise their standard in society. For example, according to a recent survey conducted by the Guardian revealed that 40% of the young people replaced their smartphones with newer models after seeing celebrity endorsement in various magazines and newspapers.
It is e negative development because people are getting into debt and due to overspending they are facing financial crises. That is to say that, most people take loans from banks or use credit cards to buy the things that they cannot afford and do not need. As a result, they get into debt and sometimes they are not able to pay that money back that eventually results in the financial crisis. For instance, a report published by the Delhi times in the year 2017 suggested that 45% of the middle-class people in India owe money to the banks because they purchased expensive cars on loans and now facing financial issues.
In conclusion, media has affected the society to an extent that people buy products that they are not required and this is a negative development because they are facing financial issues due to overspending.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99653979239 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68677489826 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508650519031 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5714452471 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.272727273 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201901947359 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096706311136 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886962602049 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159386066502 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080610268214 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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