An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In recent years, there has been a growing debate about whether the utilising of computers such as tablets and laptop instead of printed materials such as books and notes for pupils at school is effective. It is put forward by some people that it is advantageous. The opponents, on the other hand, argue that there are several drawbacks. This essay will identify both the benefits and drawbacks surrounding this issue before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, the points in favour of the papers replaced by computers, the most persuasive one is perhaps that it is convenient. In other words, scholars can search for more resources on the internet without opening heavy books. To illustrate, it is clear to see that many learners using online dictionary instead of a dictionary of book. Another point often made by the opponents is that we could preserve the natural environments such as forests and mountain. This is because we could reduce waste by using computers.
Despite the advantages discussed above, there are a number of negatives arising out of computer work as well. one of the most conspicuous disadvantages is that it can occur in children's health issue. This is evidenced by the fact that prolonged exposure to electronic waves can cause health problems such as dry eyes and headaches. As well as that students may easily expose to harmful website. This is because many websites contain offensive content such as violent and sexual images.
To sum, it can be observed that there are both benefits and ill effects in relation to education by computers including laptop and tablets. To choose, which side I am on, I believe that advantages far surpass disadvantages, owing to the reasons discussed above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, as for, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with, as well as that, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03819444444 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73924445165 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2016379982 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218000377737 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052150310464 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482135625725 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1102843367 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527058329535 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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