In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is opinion about this?
Nowadays, the advantages and disadvantages of “curfew” implemented in some areas of US are debatable among parents. While some of them focus on its benefits, some of them argue that it creates more damage than benefits. In my opinion, the implementation of this rule is not suitable for this century.
First of all, parents who are supporters of implementing this rule claim that this rule provides benefits not only teenagers but also parents. According to this thought, this rule makes teenagers keeping away from some risky activities such as hanging out late, using drags or crime. In addition, this parents are not worried about their children at night. Thanks to this rule, parents are sure about their children not getting involved any violence at a certain time.
In the other hand, some of them advocates this rule causes some drawbacks for both sides. This rule restrains the teenagers who are willing to making their decision themselves. This restriction makes teenagers disconnect to life and forces them sitting at home and taking decisions with their family. This prevents teenagers becoming self supported. Another disadvantage point is related to parents. This rule turns to parents into autocratic from friendly approach. This transformation creates clashing between parents and teenagers and damages their communication between each other.
In conclusion, the implementation of this rule include both advantages and disadvantages into itself. It is as soon as disputable topic, in my opinion imposing this rule cannot be applied to keep up with the necessities of this century. As parents turn into autocratic from friendly approach, teenagers can miss some job opportunities
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...taking decisions with their family. This prevents teenagers becoming self support...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41729323308 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95171202493 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563909774436 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7529748724 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7647058824 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214672182711 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080001506612 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384542521572 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143123524427 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258259338732 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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