in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people in the world still go hungry.
why is this the case?
what can be done about this problem
Agriculture has been a topic that attracts great attention in recent years. Although agricultural activities have been rapidly grown, many people now still have to face starvation. This essay aims to elaborate on some possible effects and solutions to this issue.
To begin with, there is a host of the reason why many people still go hungry regardless of agricultural development. In fact, agriculture activities actually only modify in some developed countries with the assistant of hi-tech machines such as China, Thailand or America. The poor residents in a remote area especially in underdeveloped countries do not have many opportunities to access sufficient technology or agriculture methods. In addition, suffering from severely natural disasters like flooding or drought may cause a lack of food production in this area and directly make people go hungry.
To solving that problem, a number of the solution has been addressed. The starvation in some nations could be reduced by using international aid and volunteer supplies. The government should take into account to spend budget state on improving the quality of agriculture machines in some remote areas with a view to increasing their standard of living. Moreover, people had better participate and raise funds on volunteer organizations to contribute to alleviating the starving issue of poorer areas. By means of illustration, the international aid organization has supplied a large amount of food to some areas which have to suffer from starving like India.
In conclusion, the government should take action to help poorer people avoid starving such as supply food and money for them to improve their local agriculture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42424242424 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03522327827 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6085411425 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160600725929 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561081297332 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581827350376 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937932381716 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511469226753 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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