In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In today's fast growing developing environment their is rapid advancements and development in all the fields like medical science, engineering, architecture ,arts and humanities across the globe.
Significant contribution is made by students , professionals and researchers across the world in various fields.
Their are specialized 4-year graduate degree programs first teaching the initial concepts to the students clearing their fundamentals and then teaching them the previous achievements in that field.
It is only after then students grab the concepts well and then derive a new methodology or procedure.
I completely agree with the author claim that in any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
For example : In field of medical science , various doctors and researchers across the globe are researching about the cure of various hazardous diseases like cancer etc. The coming generation will study the detailed exiting researches , theories and will get the required motivation from the past achivements and will then come up with a more better cure. Medical science is a vast field and researches are done across various countries by people of different culture places religion .Keeping and updated with this knowledge will lead to better advancements in future.
Similarly is the field of aerospace engineering , various countries are sending their astronauts , satellites outside earth and collecting information of space.Reading of the past work will deepen the knowledge of current students and will strongly influence them to make better contributions in their field.
So in conclusion , to make a significant contribution in any endeavour , one should have its basic fundamentals up to the mark which can be achieved by degree courses in that field. One should read and understand various past research publications , generals and do practical experiments on them .
After gaining the full understanding their is a high possibility of advancement in that field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, similarly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65396825397 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14410352601 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552380952381 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0402159426 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.416666667 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276078603879 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110735770072 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15021308222 0.0758088955206 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132657764343 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162745600424 0.0667264976115 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.1639044944 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.